Paper revision 2 | Psychology homework help

Original papers are attached and needs to be revised with the intructions my instructor gave me in the paper after grading it. Instructors feedback is pasted on the bottom. Scroll down 


Thanks for your submission of Assignment 3. It requires some reorganization and clarification of the elements.  You did not identify the variables you are measuring, did not adequately describe your instruments (measures of the variables), did not identify your research method, omitted any information about data collection with the instruments or any plans for analysis. Essentially, the paper does not fit the instructions in any way shape or form.  

Again, if you make revisions, do them in a different color font so they stand out for scoring the revision.  

If you have questions, please ask.


Faculty Comments:

No plans for data analysis are located in this paper. We have no idea whether the data analysis plans make sense or not since we do not know what method your study is using (two of your measures are qualitative and two of them are quantitative) and since none of them are adequately described, we have no way to assess the appropriateness of the plans. After you (1) complete your description of the variables and measures and (2)  fully describe what type of questions and the response set to be used for them, then you need to (3) define the method and finally insert (4)  how that method is appropriate for the analysis you plan to propose. All the pieces must fit like pieces of a puzzle. 

COMPETENCY: Evaluate research methods and psychological research findings.

CRITERION: Select appropriate measures for each variable of a research study.



Does not select appropriate measures for each variable of a research study.

Faculty Comments:

These measures are identified in the paper but not described. It is not identified how they will be used. None of them is identified more than to be named. 

Sixteen Personality Factor Questionnaire – 16PF 

Eysenck Personality Questionnaire-Revised – EPQ-R

Rorschach Inkblot Test 

Draw-A-Person Test in

For each scale, be sure include the scale of measure for each variable (see text for choices, e.g. nominal, ordinal, etc.) and be sure to include how many questions, types of questions (open ended, multiple choice, etc.), response choices (yes/no, frequency, etc)

CRITERION: Describe how identified methods will be used in a research study.



Does not describe how identified methods will be used in a research study.

Faculty Comments:

The method is not identified. Methods, as we learned in Assignment 1 are either qualitative, quantitative, or both (mixed). A survey is a data collection instrument. Which of these methods will your study use?

CRITERION: Describe the data analysis process for a proposed research study.



Does not describe the data analysis process for a proposed research study.

Faculty Comments:

No data analysis plans are provided in this paper. How do you plan to analyze your variables in the measures you listed?  

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